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so cute you want to smack it around

[img]http://members.optusnet.com.au/drummonds/cute2.jpg[/img]

for a cuteness competition over at conceptart. just wanted to get way away from my normal style and see what came out of it.

Submitted by MoonUnit on Wed, 04/05/05 - 1:49 AMPermalink

ha ha nice, gotta have those watery eyes

Angry Man

I started this painting just after getting my new Wacom tablet. I'm trying to teach myself how to paint skin textures so Im going to use alot of reference art to see what human skin looks like and how to paint it.

This is the first human face that I have painted in colour. I think it looks alright, painting the hair was the hardest part. I think If I keep on practicing like this I should build up my skills for texturing and more 2D work.

Any comments/crits would be real helpful.
[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/simages2/415_Angry_FaceL.jpg[/img]
ps: Sorry it's a bit big, didn't think it would do that. Please feel free to Save Target As... to have a less closer look at it.

Submitted by Kalescent on Sat, 30/04/05 - 5:45 AMPermalink

Thats a really good piece, the only thing that sticks out to me immediately is the lack of any wetness to his eyeballs.

Submitted by Falco on Sat, 30/04/05 - 5:53 AMPermalink

Maybe thats what he's angry about, he's got awfuly dry eye's.

Thanks for the tip. In the photo his eye's are a little more closed and the detail in the pic didn't realy show the wetness that should be there. I just didn't think about it.

That's the kind of stuff I need to be learnin, so hopefuly after I have done more of these practise paintings I'll get the hang of it.

Submitted by Aloriael on Sat, 30/04/05 - 8:46 AMPermalink

One of the most impressive portraits on Sumea.

You could be more careful about the saturation of your shadows next time. They look a bit too grey and some parts of the image looks like you desaturated it completely.

Also it looks like you like to get right into the details really quickly. Maybe next time you should also try and plan out where the features are really suppose to be before you go nuts over the details....because some of the features look a bit symbolic.... maybe mirror your image and have a look at it.
The hair looks quite symbolic and flat because you did them strand by strand, try not to do that. Hair is made up of highlights, midtones and shadows.... painting it by the strand means that person has string as hair which is too thick to pass off as hair....also it looks like fur because it's too dense in some places.

I think the best thing to do is to actually study how things work....do a few self portraits because you will learn a lot more than copying a ref photo. It's good because then you'll realise eyeballs don't have a matte texture and so on.

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=226083 <--- might help.

Submitted by denz on Sat, 30/04/05 - 9:55 PMPermalink

cool .

I agree with aloriael especially with the hair.

Submitted by MoonUnit on Sun, 01/05/05 - 11:25 PMPermalink

an amazing pic, reminds me of was it dr breen from HL2

Godo

I've haven't realy been doing much 3D stuff for a while. Leading up towards the end of last year most of the people in my class were realy getting anxious about finding work. We just kept rushing about, asking each other "Have you done your demo reel yet? Have you done your demo reel yet?"

After graduation I got a bit sick of it all and I haven't touched the computer for about five months. Now Im just gonnna start practicing and just model whaterver takes my fancy. Im also realy going to try more 2D art and learn more traditional styles of drawing and painting, so that I can make some of my own concept art.

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/simages2/415_Godo_WIPL.jpg[/img]
The concept for this model came from Aaron St Goddard. He's got alot of cool concepts.

The wings and feathers are all one sided, to cut down on poly's, but I think the wings might look to thin after I finish, but I will just wait to see.

Submitted by Makk on Wed, 27/04/05 - 12:31 AMPermalink

heh, very nice Falco :)
Texture could use some sharpenin up though.

dwarfy low poly

Hey guys,

Thought id put up some WIP 3d low poly stuff for crit etc, just a head (and body) of a dwarf that ive been doing a bit in here and there last week out of boredom :) . What you see is about 800 polys and 1 512 diffuse, all crit welcome, post the rest whenever i get around to finishing it.

[IMG]http://img247.echo.cx/img247/6953/faceweb6av.jpg[/IMG]

Submitted by J I Styles on Wed, 20/04/05 - 8:00 PMPermalink

looks good, one of the finest game res moustaches I've seen to date [:)]
I've got a few tips and suggestions:
-his beard could do with a little more alpha stripping on it's 3/4 silhouette, and a little more shaping to the ear
-He's suffering from butterfly patterns across the mirrored seams in the texture - detail tonal change horizontally on seams, and try and give yourself an extra poly margin on the dominant side of the seam uv's so you can eliminate noticable mirroring with minimal extra uv space.
-saturate the dark areas in the skin tones a bit more to give the skin a bit more of a translucent fleshy feel. This should eliminate the "powdered cheeks" look you get from dark lighting shadowing light textured areas. (eg, tip of the nose, cheek puffs, etc)

anyways, there's a few things to think about -- he's looking good, I'd like to see him pushed that little bit further [:)]

Submitted by MoonUnit on Wed, 20/04/05 - 11:57 PMPermalink

thats really cool, the face has a lot of character to it. The point where the beard meets on the seam in the center is a bit off atm though, as Joel said the texture but also it sorta becomes a blocky shape very sharply where it juts out. keep it up!

Submitted by Farmer on Fri, 22/04/05 - 3:28 AMPermalink

Thanks for the feedback guys much appreciated :)

Ill touch his head up soon n post the changes, thanks.

Submitted by Makk on Fri, 22/04/05 - 7:07 AMPermalink

Nice! I like the little pores and wrinkles on him.
Add a touch of red to the nose to top it off.....or not!

Either way I like it :)

Submitted by denz on Fri, 22/04/05 - 7:39 AMPermalink

very cool. nice skin tones. :)

Programmer art 2, animation

Submitted by Johnn on Fri, 15/04/05 - 5:30 AMPermalink

kewl - they look great, good life and movement to them.

Submitted by MoonUnit on Sat, 16/04/05 - 12:09 PMPermalink

your fast leaving any work that could be called "programmer art" :D good stuff

Texturing

Started to texture the face of my character, first attempt at texturing any model. I am still learning a lot of new things all the time. There is still work to be done, but here is a work in progress. Comments and crits are appreciated.

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/codyalday/2005412104016_CC_Tex2…]

Submitted by tojo on Fri, 22/04/05 - 5:56 AMPermalink

good work.. you seem to have the principles down...
remember that skin has a lot of different colors in it..
not just pink.. play around with blues and greens for cool areas and reds and purples in warm areas
seems to have unwrapped nicely for a first go ..:)

Submitted by Makk on Fri, 22/04/05 - 7:02 AMPermalink

I would agree with tojo, the face needs more skintone colour in there.
Try to also get some more smoothness in there as well. At the moment its very muddy. Pick about 4 or 5 colours and lay them down somewhere on the texture sheet, and have a go with just using those colours. Remeber to stay away from black for shadows, a nice shade of brown can often work, experiement and find out!!
Also, study other peoples textures! This is something that I think can be quite helpful, especially when your new. Look at the different factors in there, try to figure what it is that makes the texture look good and why things like the colours the use, where they paint in shadows and highlights, just stuff like that. Then try applying those methods to your work.
If your still not sure of how something go out and get yourself some reference. This is good for (among other things) getting the shapes of individual parts just right, things like eyes, mouth, ears, etc
Finally as was mentioned it looks like you've done a good job of the unwrapping. Well done.

Keep at it! :)

Submitted by codyalday on Sat, 23/04/05 - 1:58 AMPermalink

Thankaz heaps for the crits Tojo and Makk, really helping me out. I am working on it, bit by bit, as I am in the model challenge, so most of the time is working on that. Just wondering, do you guys and gals work from a grey scale first, then apply a coloured layer and work from that, or just go into the colour straight away? Also, done some more work to it.

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/codyalday/200542215641_CC_Tex4.j…]

Submitted by conundrum on Sat, 23/04/05 - 5:15 AMPermalink

gooed progress, its getting better, i'm definately no pro on texturing (i've hardly ever gotten to that stage with a model). so i won't struggle trying to explain what i thnk needs correcting.

Benoit Regimbal painted one of the best head textures i've ever seen so ive added a link to his wip for the head, its preety big for a jpg (1mb) but its very detailed and helpful. definately worth a look.
[url]http://www.planetquake.com/polycount/cottages/b1ll/step_head_champ.jpg[…]

Submitted by MoonUnit on Mon, 25/04/05 - 9:26 AMPermalink

really coming along now, looks a bit more male though. was it supposed to be? its the thick eyebrows that do it

Hive Mind Gaurdian

Character concept for my comic - Hybrid prime
these are beings who are bread with a genetic defect making them more ceceptable to mind controll.

oh and they pilot bitchin mechs.

[img]http://members.optusnet.com.au/drummonds/lomechytec.jpg[/img]

Submitted by Lechy on Thu, 07/04/05 - 7:22 PMPermalink

You have a fantastic loose style, I love it. cheers.

Submitted by LiveWire on Thu, 07/04/05 - 9:47 PMPermalink

looks a bit like a starwars rolling driod thing

Submitted by MoonUnit on Fri, 08/04/05 - 4:19 AMPermalink

does a tad but its still a cool design, itd be cool to see more detail on that thing

*Important Note before posting here*

Just a quick note, as I've noticed it's becoming more common in this section.

This applies to Sumea Profile Members who upload pictures in their gallery, and then file attach the same picture in this section for comments.

Please don't duplicate images on the server like this. It's wasting space. All you have to do is, when you upload your image in your sumea journal, log out and view it in the gallery. Right mouse click the picture and find its properties. It should be something similar to this :

http://www.sumea.com.au/simages2/335_character_demonL.jpg

Copy and paste that in your forum message, and wrap that with the img tag.. That's all there is to it! No need to reupload the same image onto the site!

Programmer art

Poor xenomorph... he picked on the wrong girl today [:D]
[img]http://kez.dontknowdontcare.com/misc/alien.jpg[/img]
[size=1]Artrage on a thinkpad p150 /w A4 tablet, 1hr approx[/size=2]

Submitted by Pantmonger on Wed, 06/04/05 - 5:58 PMPermalink

That?s pretty good, especially for ?programmer art? I?d say the most immediate issues with it are her eyes, they are so huge and have a bit if zombie death stare about them, due to the iris being half under the top lid but so far away from the bottom.
All that aside, good stuff.

Oh and go artrage.

Pantmonger

Submitted by Makk on Fri, 08/04/05 - 3:11 AMPermalink

I like it Kezza.
Good linework

Submitted by denz on Fri, 08/04/05 - 7:44 AMPermalink

cool. I actually like the expression in her eyes.

As if the alien is no shock to her.

Submitted by arcane on Wed, 13/04/05 - 6:46 AMPermalink

...here I was expecting ASCII art in the form of obfuscated C...

Very nice work though!

Character Model

3497 polys But still a bit more work to go befor the texturing.

Insert Image: [img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/3DArty/200544201029_newmanrender…]

Submitted by LiveWire on Tue, 05/04/05 - 11:59 PMPermalink

watch your poly distribution. you have a lot in the arms and fingers, but very little in other much larger areas.

Submitted by denz on Wed, 06/04/05 - 12:05 AMPermalink

hey, nice.

I think you could work on the pose a bit more. Right now you could pretty much run a straight line down the entire front of the body, so theres no real feeling of weight/balance to him.

Keep it up.

Lets Play Dominos

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/simages2/56_dominoL.jpg[/img]

Just some fan art, I have not tried to do an image in the American comic style for quite some time and then the urge came upon me, so Domino fan art it is

Submitted by LiveWire on Mon, 04/04/05 - 7:48 PMPermalink

dont know what it's from but i like it a lot.

Submitted by Pantmonger on Wed, 06/04/05 - 5:52 PMPermalink

LiveWire: Thanks for the comment, Domino is a character that used to be in X-Force one of the X-men spin offs back when I used to read them a lot of comics (about 10 years ago).

Anuxinamoon: Thanks also, I?m glad people like it.

Pantmonger

sketchathon oc and pencils

Submitted by conundrum on Sun, 03/04/05 - 11:48 PMPermalink

cool work, i really like the first and second, i'll be looking forward to seeing what else you can come up with. good luck

Submitted by Alti on Mon, 04/04/05 - 9:33 AMPermalink

thanks moonunit, it was the most fun too.
anyone know people who need illustration work done ?
i have free time this month.

Submitted by Anuxinamoon on Tue, 05/04/05 - 5:04 AMPermalink

I love the second one. The face on it reminds me of that face on the front of the DOOM 3 manual. Looks cool and spooky at the same time! Awesome!

Submitted by denz on Tue, 05/04/05 - 6:27 AMPermalink

always like seeing your stuff alti.

I really dig the second one to.

The third one I think his arms look awkward.

Submitted by MoonUnit on Thu, 07/04/05 - 5:08 AMPermalink

the last thing youve posted and the "preistministri.jpg" one are brill, id love to see that kinda thing combined with something like say some 3d abstract background work or something. If you can found a good colaboration partner you could really take this to the next level

Black Dragon 2D

Hi, here is another image done in photoshop last year. I don't really use photoshop for painting anymore, I switched to Painter instead. With this image i wanted to play around with light and shadow. cheers.

[img]icon_paperclip.gif[/img] Download Attachment: [url="http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/Lechy/200541201524_blackdragon2…"]blackdragon2.jpg[/url]
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Submitted by denz on Sun, 03/04/05 - 8:56 AMPermalink

really nice mate. the only thing that bothers me is his right foot, doesn't look up to scratch with the rest of the image.

Submitted by MoonUnit on Sun, 03/04/05 - 10:09 PMPermalink

looks great and i think denz meant the left foot, the thing to the foots left is a hand if im not mistaken...

Submitted by conundrum on Sun, 03/04/05 - 11:58 PMPermalink

nice work, its got a good composition adn the pose/action is great. my only crit is the use of black in the shadow areas, this is personal preference but from what ive seen i think most of the top painters dont use it too much. in my opinion you are better of using darker shades of colours or colours from the background. hopefully that made sense, keep up the good work, it would be nice to see some more recent stuff too

Submitted by Lechy on Mon, 04/04/05 - 12:33 AMPermalink

Thanks for the tips, I actually didn't use any black, I ramped up the contrast later on and that created the darker shadows. I do understand what you mean though. It does look a bit too dark. cheers.

Submitted by LiveWire on Mon, 04/04/05 - 12:51 AMPermalink

i dont mind the think black too much. gives it a bit of a comic book look, though i dont know if it's meant to or not. like like it though, very nice. and i agree with denz on the foot - one of the first things i noticed.

Submitted by Wizenedoldman on Mon, 04/04/05 - 6:29 AMPermalink

the creatures pose and action reminds me of the splash image from Heroes of Might and Magic 4's menu, also reminds me of Final fantasy 7 with all those summons of dragony things with blast breaths. RAHHHH! :)

Mattework: Industrial Scene

Hi Folks
Here is a mattepainting that I have finished.

All created in photoshop (as usual) with some help from 3D max. A friend on the job created the pipes, which I then did the light and some texture for.
Finally good to use 3D, certainly makes thing easier.

Cheers
Weather
http://www.mozsi.com

[img]http://www.mozsi.com/images/tamarat.jpg[/img]

Submitted by LiveWire on Sat, 02/04/05 - 3:14 AMPermalink

that looks amazing.

dude you've just got to do some concepts for levels for the sumea mod!!!!

Submitted by 3DArty on Sat, 02/04/05 - 7:21 AMPermalink

nice work[:)] did you do the clould too* if so good job.

Submitted by Makk on Sat, 02/04/05 - 8:04 AMPermalink

Nice colour pallete.
Top work as usual :)

Submitted by Lechy on Sat, 02/04/05 - 8:25 PMPermalink

Excellent, it looks very eerie, like a ghost town. The sky is cool also.

Submitted by Johnn on Sun, 03/04/05 - 3:07 AMPermalink

another fantastic piece - thankyou for posting it.

Submitted by weather on Wed, 06/04/05 - 1:14 AMPermalink

Thanks for the comments people.
This one image took about 70 hrs and was for a video film clip, that has yet to be released( probably not meant to talk about it!).
It had to be created in such a way as to allow the "Flame" people to put a move on the image. I have not seen the final comp, but I am sure they have done a great job.
It was a real blast working with a whole group of people with skills in different mediums. ie. 3D, Flame and Design.
I reckon working in a group environment tends to bring out better results, than simply working by yourself, plus it more fun.
Anyway, thats my 2 cents.

PS I am pretty busy with work to help out with the sumea mod. Though, its a flickle business so you never know.....

Cheers
Gerhard Mozsi

Submitted by Makk on Fri, 22/04/05 - 7:27 AMPermalink

Gah! that highlight on the girls nose is perfect! So well defined.
I hope the studies were beneficial for you :)

Hi, this is my first post 2D techbeast

Im writing this for the second time coz i think i stuffed the first one. Anyway, I was gonna model this guy but it seemed to hard so i left him as a concept. Originaly drawn with ink and wash then colored in photoshop. It is an old image but still my favourite, let me know what you think. cheers.
Insert Image: [img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/Lechy/20053319346_techbeast2a.jp…]

Submitted by conundrum on Fri, 01/04/05 - 10:45 AMPermalink

great work, the textured style and harsh lighting really suit the subject matter. one stylistic detail that i think would fit in well is blending in parts of the character into the backround, just a little bit of smoke or glow to mix the two. right now it looks slightly cutout. of course that being really picky, its a brilliant drawing and ill be look forward to more.

Submitted by Kalescent on Fri, 01/04/05 - 10:53 AMPermalink

Frickken awesome! [:O]

Lightings great! love the helmet design too. The only glitch that sticks out to me is that his empty arms shoulder looks lifted to high - when I strike a similar pose, it feels quite uncomfortable, non-natural. Then again im not made of steel pipes and hydraulics so i doubt he cares much about that kind of thing [;)]

Overall I'ts a nice piece dude.

Submitted by souri on Fri, 01/04/05 - 11:06 AMPermalink

Lechy, I've activated your Sumea profile account a while ago and emailed you the notification, but your email bounced. If you remember your login and password, you can login straight away and change your email address to one that works while you're there.

Submitted by Johnn on Fri, 01/04/05 - 7:11 PMPermalink

nice piece Leachy, the Ink & wash are working really well and creating some great subtle effects. I look forward to seeing more of you work posted :)

Submitted by Lechy on Fri, 01/04/05 - 8:29 PMPermalink

Thanks for the comments.

conundrum: Yep, I think that would be a good idea now. I did this one about a year ago and making
Backgrounds was still a little perplexing for me. Nowdays I try to blend the subject
matter and background a bit more.

Hazard: I see what you mean. I think that happened because I was trying to give it a
perspective look.

Fallen Knight

Hey everyone, this character is something I've been working on during my break to try to improve my skills. The concepts from Neverwinter Nights 2 which can be seen here. C & C are welcome.

[url]http://pcmedia.ign.com/pc/image/article/536/536518/neverwinter-nights-2…]

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/delmo/2005330111055_FallenKnight…]

Submitted by souri on Thu, 31/03/05 - 12:54 PMPermalink

Hey dude, you've done an awesome job! Texturing is awesome (especially on the armour), and the detail you've put into it all is great! However, what I think could make this model even greater is if you transfered some more elements from the concept which I think is really important to taking it to the next level.

The concept has got some great shape for the legs and that area. It would look much better for the model to follow suit and define the calf muscles, knees, ankle bones etc. Give the shoes some form too! They're kinda rounded and look like painted socks at the moment! [;)] Doing the above will make the bottom half of him look less cartoony, and give him a more dynamic looking stature.
The skin on the hand looks a bit too pinkish as well, and the thumb may be a little too long. In anycase, it's definately job well done! Fantastic work.

Submitted by Malus on Thu, 31/03/05 - 7:10 PMPermalink

Looking good man,
I pretty much agree with what Souri said but also the plume of hair is alot shorter on your model and the metals, especially the mask, seems a bit dark, you lose focus on them.

Also the sleeve seems too puffy at the shoulder, on the concept it tapers in.

Givey wires. [:)]

Submitted by LiveWire on Thu, 31/03/05 - 8:45 PMPermalink

i likes it. did you do the texture as well? the image only says model. if so then every texture i see from you is a huge leap in quality.

Submitted by Delmo on Fri, 01/04/05 - 3:21 AMPermalink

Yeah I agree souri your right on the ball especially about the shoes. I have to put more detail im my feet, usually that where I take detail out to add to other areas since the character will probably be moving. Im definantly going to try and reach that next level with the next character I create. Like malus said I did start to loose focus regards to keeping with the concept. You really need a nice model sheet to get exact to the concept art. All elements were done by me beside the concept. Cheers for the C & C.[:)]

Here's the wires and also the high poly source model around 1 million polys.

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/delmo/2005331274_Wires01.jpg[/img]

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/delmo/200533121846_High01.jpg[/i…]

Submitted by Kalescent on Fri, 01/04/05 - 5:08 AMPermalink

Hey Dean - you must be proud man, both me and pat are the fruit of your loins!!!! [:P]

Submitted by Ninja on Fri, 01/04/05 - 6:14 AMPermalink

Awesome model [:D] fantastic work on the high poly.....
crits about the character have already been mentioned by souri, apart from those little things everything kicks arse [8D]

Submitted by 3DArty on Fri, 01/04/05 - 6:35 AMPermalink

Nice Work Love the look you must be happy.[:)]

Submitted by Malus on Fri, 01/04/05 - 9:55 AMPermalink

I second your chubby and raise you a stiffy. [:|]

Hazard: I'm so proud of mee boys, snif sniff lol, man you guys already knew what you were doing before I met you both, but thanks. [:)]

Submitted by Lechy on Fri, 01/04/05 - 10:23 AMPermalink

Thats a pretty unconventional knight, which makes it even cooler. I wonder how it would look if the fabric of his shirt was a different color, my personal opinion is that the shirt tends to blend in with the rest of the armor, making it hard to see whats going on there, perhaps a different color would bring out the details more clearly. cheers.

aircraft painting

This weekends project - finally finished... I think!
Those of you with photographic memories will remember some 'SpaceRacer' concepts that I posted some time ago. Well I have revisited one of the designs, revised some details and completed a painting. I have included a link to the original sketch for those that want to see what it evolved from.

Done entirely in photoshop (actually about 10 lines on the grill at front were done in Freehand - easier, faster and more accurate for parallel, smooth, curved lines)

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/simages2/258_JohnNewall_aircraftL.jpg[/img]

[img]icon_paperclip.gif[/img] Download Attachment: [url="http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/johnn/2005327211637_spaceracer_s…"]spaceracer_sketch.jpg[/url]
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Submitted by conundrum on Tue, 29/03/05 - 12:04 AMPermalink

nice work, reminds me of John Wallin's painting style. one thing which looks a little off is the right hand part of the nose, which seems a bit skewed in terms of perspective (might just be me). thats all though otherwise its great, a nice sense of realism.

Submitted by Makk on Tue, 29/03/05 - 9:18 AMPermalink

Great execution John. Its been enjoyable watching you improve with each new piece.
Metal work is great, especially on areas where it scratches/chips.
Rocket though doesnt look up as good as the ships rendering, which is a bit weird. It might be the black bits on it as they arent rendered as sharply as the rest. Perspective on it looks like it might be a little off aswell, like the tip of it faces inwards towards the ships body. No thing major though as the perspective as a whole is quite good.
Nice colour scheme as well.

Submitted by Johnn on Thu, 31/03/05 - 9:56 AMPermalink

thanks for comments guys. All the perspective is probably slightly off as I only did a quick sketch 'by eye' for the base drawing - didn't think that It was going to become such a finished piece initially!

The black sections of the rockets are quite ambigious regarding material representation aren't they :( at the end of the day it reflects my indecision with them really - a detail I struggled with.

gotta admit MoonUnit, I'm not a fan of the pen tool in photoshop and always use a dedicated vector program for vector art, even if that requires working between 2 programs. I find Freehand and Illustrator more accurate, more flexable and faster that photoshop by miles... a lot of miles!

I'm going to attempt to do another one following the same process. If it comes out as well I'll post it up too.

Submitted by MoonUnit on Fri, 01/04/05 - 2:36 AMPermalink

oh no kidding, if you set out to do vector art then photoshop is really not where you should be heading. but its a pain to involve another program when u just want a couple of curved lines.

Submitted by Lechy on Fri, 01/04/05 - 4:37 AMPermalink

Cool, this is my first post on sumea. The ship design is pretty cool, but the execution seems half finished. That is what bothers me the most. I look at the weathered green paint and think cool then i see the engine and I go hmmmm. But if it is just a concept then its ok to do that. Also you seem to have a strange mix of sharp lines and blurry lines which is a bit inconsistant. cheers.

fat rabbit

been a long time since i have made anything so

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/rastus/200532743333_blah.jpg[/img]

about 570 tri's and a 512 texture hand painted metal sux spent a whole 2 min on it :/

need to go over it and get rid of some seems and fix some spots i aint happy with

Submitted by souri on Wed, 30/03/05 - 1:41 AMPermalink

Looks more like a grasshopper or bug rather than a rabbit. [:D]

Submitted by LiveWire on Wed, 30/03/05 - 2:55 AMPermalink

yeah, but it does look pretty cool though

Submitted by RasTuS on Wed, 30/03/05 - 4:04 AMPermalink

yeah i could not think of a title for the thread then that song came on :(

Submitted by denz on Wed, 30/03/05 - 7:09 AMPermalink

cool, i like the design alot as with the colors.

Submitted by Anuxinamoon on Fri, 01/04/05 - 8:39 AMPermalink

Hehe cool stuff cookies. He looks very happy! His skin reminds me of that mushroom from Morrowind that glows like that :p

The metal looks really un-exciting though. Perhaps add some soldering lumpies where te metal joins or something? More dents and scratches and some weathering could help too :)

Submitted by RasTuS on Sat, 02/04/05 - 3:12 AMPermalink

yeah i was looking at the metal at work when i was welding and im like nah to much effort to paint welds so ill find something else ally would be easy to paint tho its shiny :D

Submitted by Anuxinamoon on Sat, 02/04/05 - 11:30 AMPermalink

LOL cookie always trying to find the easy way out [:p] You shouldn't paint something cause its easy! Challange yourself man! Thats how you get better!

Submitted by Lechy on Sat, 02/04/05 - 8:29 PMPermalink

The design is pretty cool.

Ty Doujinshi fanart. Shazza on a Bunyip

g'day everyone. throught i'd share this pic with you. it's one of six pics i'll be showcasting to the AIE to get in next year. this one comes under as FAN ART..dont worry.. its the only unoriginal of the six.. the others are my own creations and characters.

basicly i drew shazza in my own style and draw the bunyip as well for good measure. i sat down with the game on the consept art menu that i unlocked in it and took notes and skeatched shazza and the bunyip adapting it to my style.

the story for this being a doujinshi (a doujinshi is when a fan creates there own version of someone elses idea.. like now people write starwars books) is dark. Ty has been captured by the evil arts (or EA wink wink) and shazza is on a mission in her Bunyip to reasure him. The bunyip is now somewhat battle worn... i know you guys will proably largh at the pic but beleave me to took a good deal of time. ^^

so enjoy.

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Submitted by Anuxinamoon on Fri, 01/04/05 - 8:49 AMPermalink

Cool. I haven't played the game myself though *hides*

Few things you might want to fix up is that her breasts are very strange looking. Try pushing them out more to the side and point the them out to the side more so they are at a 3 1/4 view. Also her shoulder joints look really large which gives the impression of them comming forward (I don't know if this is what you wanted or not)

You could also soften the picture by colouring the line art of your drawing a similar shade to the colour its outlining. It's just that the black lines look really strong against your colours as the shading lacks any strong contrast :)
Not sure how that would look, but it's just a tip. [;)]

Secret Of The 7 Scrolls

I just finished developing a 2D Action/Traditional Rpg called Secret Of The 7 Scrolls now being featured at download.com.

Here's the link
http://www.download.com/Secret-Of-The-Seven-Scrolls/3000-7538_4-1037362…

I need your support, please download the demo. Thanks![:)]

Environment: Water Extraction Facility

Hi guys, well i did this image for a Half Life 2 modification called "Badge of Blood" from Warpigstudios, this is a water extraction facility located at one of the Mars poles... Done 100% in painter... coments and critics are just welcome!

[URL=http://www.imageshack.us][IMG]http://i152.exs.cx/img152/290/wef33yn.jpg…]

Submitted by MoonUnit on Tue, 29/03/05 - 9:24 AMPermalink

looks cool, is that supposed to be snow or ice?

Submitted by Makk on Tue, 29/03/05 - 9:53 AMPermalink

I dig!
lots of nice stuff going on Rizo :)
It is a bit hard to tell if its snow or ice, but judging by the sharp edges of it, I guess its ice. if it is snow, you might want to get some smooth transitions between the edge of the snow and building.

Submitted by Rizo on Tue, 29/03/05 - 12:47 PMPermalink

Well actually it's ice, but since it's the first time that i deal with it.. i'm not pretty "happy" with the ice result.. when i add snow to it, it looks like icecream! [:X] Anyway, thanks for your coments! :)

Submitted by Kalescent on Tue, 29/03/05 - 7:38 PMPermalink

Hiya Rizo - nice piece of work, I missed this thread [:(]

You beat me to it by commenting on the ice - It definately looks as though your still feeling your way with a rendering technique for it. And using nature as a base - I doubt that the ice / snow would have settled in clumps like that to form gravity defying icebergs only on certain parts of the metal.

Im a fan of your work - youve got some good things going on, so when you tackle something and you admit its the first time youve tried it, it just stands out because the rest is so well done [:)]

Submitted by Johnn on Wed, 30/03/05 - 1:09 AMPermalink

I noticed you posted in ConceptArt too - I thought their comments were v.good and it looks like the ice is a common feature to comment on. getting a cool look with the overall colour theme you have picked I suspect has put you behind the 8 ball a bit to start with. I think a dusting of snow on all the horizontal surfaces (as commented in the other forum) would really help to define the space esp the ship which is under-defined... Iwanna see the icecream version too :D yum

Master and Servant entry

thought id once again post the progress of my cg challenge entry, seeing as threads over there drop like anvils. this time im going to try and enter both the 3d and 2d categories. this is my concept for the 3d so far.

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/conundrum/20053251538_Jovial-Mas…]

Submitted by Anuxinamoon on Sat, 26/03/05 - 5:55 AMPermalink

Haha that's classic! [:D]

Although hes hands seem a bit too small compared to his face and feet. Oh and his forearm seems too long and skinny also ;)

Submitted by Kalescent on Sat, 26/03/05 - 9:35 AMPermalink

I absolutely love this concept. Hes so cheerful, and my thoughts are that anyone who screws with his little folk will suffer some sumo style consequence.

I think this idea will do better than most might think, should you pull of some brilliant painting skills.

Submitted by Johnn on Sat, 26/03/05 - 10:21 PMPermalink

ooh! another CG Challange- I really gotta keep an eye on that site.

Good start...potentially great start!- I would be interested in seeing more versions with different master/slave interaction. This scenario could be pushed in so many different directions with great results. it is already more interesting than many of the posts I just browsed in the 2D section (submissive figure A chained to dominant figure B)

keep the posts comming

Submitted by Makk on Tue, 29/03/05 - 9:57 AMPermalink

heh, nice man! good to see something different and not so serious.
Sounds like a fun topic, whens the deadline?

Submitted by Lechy on Sat, 02/04/05 - 8:34 PMPermalink

Looking pretty good so far, I really like the idea. Although animating all those little fellas seems like it would be a pain in the ass (excuse the pun).

Submitted by conundrum on Sun, 03/04/05 - 10:54 AMPermalink

thanks for the reply,
the critters shouldnt be too difficult, ill just make a base mesh, rig it then duplicate it and pose them in various positions. a smallish update, still got work to do on the toes (a bit flat) but so far im pretty plaesed with it.

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/conundrum/20054295329_Mesh_Comp_…]

EDIT: sorry about the quality of the wireframe, my attempt to use an ovarlay failed, so there are quite a few missing polys in the mesh

Submitted by ninothe on Sun, 03/04/05 - 1:06 PMPermalink

hey. ive been quietly following this over at cgtalk. i think its awsome
keep it up

Submitted by LiveWire on Mon, 04/04/05 - 1:00 AMPermalink

argh!! i just let this page load as i was looking at something else, and the first thing i was confronted with when i tabed back was a fat arse!

Submitted by LiveWire on Mon, 04/04/05 - 7:44 PMPermalink

hehehe, sorry. i like it (not just the arse, the whole artwork). i'm waiting to see the little guys. they're my favorites!

Submitted by Leviron on Thu, 07/04/05 - 10:01 AMPermalink

I think his crack needs some work. He doesn't look like he has a big ass crack as it's too far apart at the top.

I'm just curious about why 3d guys make everything have erect nipples.

Submitted by Sinister on Tue, 12/04/05 - 11:11 AMPermalink

Great work conundrum. I think your fat guy has a lot of characteristics of chubby buddha and I think you'd do well in using him as reference. Don't sweat the little stuff like the butt crack... he has pants on! Also get some reference on how fat guys chins roll, how their breasts sag, and what their feet look like.
A little bit of research goes a long way [B)]

Overall, it's a great concept and is looking good. It's refreshing seeing something out of the cliches. I wish you lots of luck!

Submitted by conundrum on Tue, 19/04/05 - 11:05 AMPermalink

sinister: thanks, i havn't checked out any refs from fat people but i do need to.

i forgot to post the progress on the clothes so here it is

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/conundrum/20054181028_Second_Pha…]

and more reently (tonight) this is some testing while trying to develop a skin shader. i'm using lightwave so i don't have sss but there are some handy plugins aroud. this is my first attempt at a shader so its not great but hopefully with a bit of practice it will develop.

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/conundrum/20054181053_Skin-Test-…]

Submitted by MoonUnit on Wed, 20/04/05 - 5:19 AMPermalink

ha ha looks cool, that face suits. does look a little sunken in though

Submitted by denz on Sun, 15/05/05 - 7:12 AMPermalink

heh, nice expression.

Submitted by conundrum on Mon, 16/05/05 - 1:39 AMPermalink

wow, its been ages since anyone replied to this thread so i havn't posted any progress. its nearing the end (three or four days left) and i'm way behind schedule but i'm still going to try and finish. this is most of the shading work on the characters completed and i'm about to begin background work. all the rendering and texturing has been done in xsi

[img]http://img138.echo.cx/img138/8151/render65ds.jpg[/img]

Submitted by codyalday on Mon, 16/05/05 - 2:10 AMPermalink

Very cool, keep it up. Good luck with the competion as well.

Submitted by LiveWire on Sat, 21/05/05 - 4:44 AMPermalink

looks great. let us know how you go.

is there a link to a thread with all the entries?

Submitted by Kalescent on Sat, 21/05/05 - 7:01 AMPermalink

These little guys are deviously planning to carry their master to the tip of the volcano and cast him into the bubbling lava arent they ? I can already see the intent of that little pygmy leading the way - hes evil, pink and waving a stick. [:O]

Their master will arise with a black helmet, digitized voice and a reduced lung capacity forcing him to breath deeply.

Good luck with the entry Conundrum, I like the idea alot. But like you say I think should you given yourself a bit more time on the background, it could have come up alot better.

Klash

[img]http://members.optusnet.com.au/rowanfamily/klash1.jpg[/img]
[img]http://members.optusnet.com.au/rowanfamily/klash2.jpg[/img]
[img]http://members.optusnet.com.au/rowanfamily/klash3.jpg[/img]

Latest work for a UT2K4 PPM.
This is not my model either, here is the link to the artists thread-
http://boards.polycount.net/showflat.php?Cat=0&Number=29438&an=0&page=0…

Tried out a spec map as well, what do people think of it? The above shots were taken at 80% self-illumination.
Feedback is welcome :)

Submitted by Kalescent on Fri, 18/03/05 - 11:52 AMPermalink

Higher res textures, higher res textures < begins chant > [:P]

Love that stomach/ass dude [:O]

But I feel that theres not enough lights and darks, especially in places where metals are sitting over the skin, like the belt ares needs some shadows going on and shoulder pads / forarm guards. So clean....

Submitted by Kezza on Sat, 26/03/05 - 11:55 PMPermalink

Hey, Can i borrow her as a placeholder mesh for the sumea mod's covert class till compo #7 gets underway?
She really looks the part [:D]

Submitted by Rizo on Sun, 27/03/05 - 10:15 AMPermalink

Great job man.. i just lov it!
Rizo[:D]

Submitted by souri on Mon, 28/03/05 - 11:07 AMPermalink

I would like to see her as a placeholder mesh too!! [:D]

Submitted by souri on Tue, 29/03/05 - 11:55 PMPermalink

Whenever you want to change your forum avatar, all you need to do is login to your Sumea profile account and upload it from there.

Submitted by Makk on Wed, 30/03/05 - 8:16 AMPermalink

but I dont have a sumea profile!

Submitted by souri on Wed, 30/03/05 - 10:42 AMPermalink

[:0] Oh, ok [:D].. I guess the question now is why haven't you registered for one? [:)] (Or maybe you have?)

THE SEARCH

Submitted by Kalescent on Sun, 13/03/05 - 2:06 PMPermalink

Cool! The one in the front has the biggest smile on, his mate just behind him is wearing that " Hmmmm Trevor is up to something! " face - I think Trev knows something the others dont. [:P]

Submitted by 3DArty on Sun, 13/03/05 - 9:28 PMPermalink

Thx Troy. you would be suprised on just how many pepole dont see the smile.[:)]

Submitted by 3DArty on Mon, 14/03/05 - 12:25 AMPermalink

Sorceror Bob#
No Hitch-hikers guide to the galaxy reference?
I dont think ive seen that in about 20Years lol.

Submitted by MoonUnit on Mon, 14/03/05 - 12:42 AMPermalink

theres a bit about the dolphins leaving the earth before it blew up incase u dont remember.
looks great, you could hang that on a wall easy.

Submitted by LiveWire on Mon, 14/03/05 - 2:36 AMPermalink

"So long, and thanks for all the fish"

there you go.