Sumea Challenge #6 -3D- Mothdust

Hi guys. First time posting on this site. Noobalicious... I'll be entering the comp too :). Here goes...

Haven't made a name for him yet so his 'default' name will be 'Undead Mafia Boss'. His story was he was once a powerful and infamous mafia boss. During the end of his somewhat normal living state he par took in some activities that were more frowned upon by his own henchmen then they did any good for anyone. So his disgruntled hench men decided to take him out. They went to his families house. He wasn't there at the time so they killed his whole family. Wife, children, butlers, etc. Upon return his henchmen had left and his family were all dead. They all died a violent death. Their souls angry, blamed their deaths on their beloved husband/father and decided to all enter his body to haunt him instead of the house. He never really died, more like possessed by his family. He wished he could die so he can escape their tormenting souls. The family, now in control of his body rampaged through the city killing firstly his henchmen that killed the family. Then every other person that had links to his mafia and worked down the chain into other mafias and crime groups wiping out all that had made them suffer so that no one else would suffer what they did.

No one could stop him. No one knows how. All the spirits in his body keep it together through shear hatred and determination to revenge there deaths. Bullet holes riddle his body. His tommy gun empties out the blood of his victims instead of the bullet shells as he fires. It is coated in old crusty blooded. Half rusted but 100% efficient. Sometimes the souls of his family leave his body to possess the body's of their victims, keeping them alive long enough to bid them their evil doing to someone else. Some people think that is when he is most vulnerable, when some of the power leaves his body when
they leave him to kill others. His eyes glow bright red. Maybe changing every so often, depending on which soul desires to control his body at the time. A dark murky cloud of mist covers most of
his face. Aerie shouts of anguish echo from his body terrifying his victims before their ultimate doom!

etc... I could ramble on more now but I won't bore you. I'll edit his story as I develop his character more. So far this is the rough concept that I have done. I'll research more about the clothes
and the time period of the story when I have the time. I was thinking of having him more mangled up from gunfire and bits of guts sticking outside his torn clothes.
[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/mothdust/2004862353_UnDeadMafiaB…]

I'm very open to any tips or suggestions. I just got my wacom tablet the other day so I'll have plenty of time to practice drawing more and making more 'better' concept drawings for ye all (and me).

Cheers,
Mothdust.