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Sumea Challenge #6 -3D- Adie

Submitted by adie on

ok heres a quick sketch of my evil flying bitch thing!!

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59.6 KB it uses it breast mouths to suck the energy from other enermys when low on enery.. the only way's u can kill it is if there arnt any other enerys around or with a few RPG's or somthing that takes off enery quickly. or she will just keep grabing and sucking energy from the other dudes!!

Submitted by Malus on Sat, 17/07/04 - 9:31 PM Permalink

yikes, freud would have something to say about where that image came from I'm sure. !?

Submitted by Kalescent on Sat, 17/07/04 - 10:51 PM Permalink

Thats a nasty character Adie ! Would fit right in with some sick, twisted horror [:D]

Submitted by MoonUnit on Sun, 18/07/04 - 4:27 AM Permalink

dude its a chick with evil living breasts, thats scary enough for any guy!! :P
seriously though its scary enough for me :)

Submitted by LiveWire on Sun, 18/07/04 - 5:42 AM Permalink

dude that's seriously screwed.

I love it.

Submitted by rezn0r on Sun, 18/07/04 - 6:36 AM Permalink

I think I dated her.

Scott.

Submitted by conundrum on Sun, 18/07/04 - 11:14 AM Permalink

nice concepts so far, i like the kiss of death head, its a really cool idea. keep it up

Submitted by Kalescent on Sun, 18/07/04 - 10:19 PM Permalink

Kiss of death or Ms Dead (Thumbs Up) [:D] looks great I like where this concept is going!

Submitted by adie on Tue, 20/07/04 - 9:04 AM Permalink

ok ill work the kiss of death into it somehow .. think ill make her more rotted and stuff too.. descusting rotted out butt or something

Submitted by MoonUnit on Fri, 23/07/04 - 8:49 AM Permalink

lol nice inclusions to your WIP. I thought she was going to be barefooted though?

Submitted by denz on Fri, 23/07/04 - 9:10 AM Permalink

The character has a lot of potential i think, its reading really well. :) The head piece is my fave part.

haha, thats the coolest block out I've ever seen! good start. my crit would be maybe make the knee area less chunky?

Submitted by adie on Mon, 26/07/04 - 8:20 AM Permalink

ok some quick screen grabs.. only at the halfwaypoint with the polly count so should be able to put some nice clothes here .. not happy with the head going to change. and still need to moddel the brestmouths

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Submitted by MoonUnit on Mon, 26/07/04 - 9:03 AM Permalink

i dont know about the actual face but i like the long neck small head thing, legs could be longer though (looking at your concepts there pretty long there).

Submitted by Jackablade on Mon, 26/07/04 - 10:27 AM Permalink

Hm, her legs look pretty short, though its difficult to see from straight on.

The wings would look much more dynamic (and realistic) if you were to curve the fingers that hold the skin flaps out like on a real bat's wing.

Could we get a closer look at the head, a side view and perhaps an angled one too. The more information you give us, the easier it is to critique. A smooth shaded model with a wireframe on top would be easier to read too.

Submitted by adie on Tue, 27/07/04 - 8:38 AM Permalink

yeah the legs are too short and thick

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heres some more angles and a head close up.. it look s like a man i know!! thats why im going to change it .. the mane problem im having is how u make alpha wings, as I'v never done this befor and I think im going about it the wrong way.. the problem is that the wing membraing is only 1 polly it has no depth.. and so on the front of the wing it looks cool with just 1 smoothing groop

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.. but on the back it looks crappy because it got sharp lines on the sides of the fingers..

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how can i make it so i dont get this ?? [?]

Submitted by adie on Sat, 31/07/04 - 3:18 AM Permalink

HELP! Please Master

Submitted by Malus on Sat, 31/07/04 - 4:25 AM Permalink

Are you using Max or Maya?

In Max its because you have different smoothing ID's, change them to all be the same ID.
In Maya its because you have sharp edge smoothing along that edge, can't remember where that is off hand.

Submitted by adie on Mon, 02/08/04 - 8:31 AM Permalink

Max and iv alread tryed that and it dosent work :( Thanks anyway Malus.. I think its becaue on the back the normals are facing the other way .. the mesh is not 2 sided(the wing membrain is only one polly thick ..so it has no depth in Y, or if u looked at it from the left u can not see it).. should i be moddeling it 2 sided.. if so how do i do this becaue i want a 2 sided alpha material so i can have hair ..and if u have bothe sides of the wing membarin verts welded to the same spot u get intersecting mesh lines :( .. hmmmm I hope u understand if not ill try and show u in pictures

Submitted by Kalescent on Mon, 02/08/04 - 10:05 AM Permalink

Im not 100% sure of your problem - but if your workin in edit mesh mode - try weld all the verts along the culprit edges together. Often if you extrude edges in Edit mesh mode - and switch to edit poly - it detaches the verts involved and you often end up with 3 or 4 verts over the top of one another that simply cannot be welded.

Just a thought - it may or may not solve the problem ???

Submitted by Kalescent on Wed, 04/08/04 - 9:53 AM Permalink

Awesome i like that addition - very sick indeed. [:D]

Submitted by adie on Fri, 06/08/04 - 7:25 AM Permalink

he he glad u like it Hazard :) its hard trying to compeat with your evil slug

Submitted by adie on Sun, 08/08/04 - 5:59 AM Permalink

quick update with the babys heads still working on there little bodys . been thinking of an idear of what she is .. i think ill make here a Family sect arnti (Ann hamelton berns), this is a Aus comp afert all, so may as well make it Astralian.. for those who dont know about the family sect,they make there kids have sex when there just childrend and when the hit ther teens they lock them in rooms and keep giving them LSD till they screeming and going crazy then they do other bads stuff to them.. they also torture them by dunking there heads in watter till they nealy drown then let them up for air and do it again.. just for doing somthig they think is bad this is just a taste of what they do. oh they also dye all the kids hair blond .. and they have doctor's in the sect who steal the babys from hospitals that are up for adoption.. there evil mother F#%kers

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Submitted by MoonUnit on Sun, 08/08/04 - 6:03 AM Permalink

dear god man, looking extremely good, but the breast faces had larger jaws and mouths in your concepts which i think i like better then solid faces.

Submitted by Aven on Sun, 08/08/04 - 7:26 AM Permalink

The main character's face is nice and freaky. The eyes just set it all off nicely :)

Agree with Moony. The breasts looked better when they were a head as opposed to a neck.

Posted by adie on

ok heres a quick sketch of my evil flying bitch thing!!

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59.6 KB it uses it breast mouths to suck the energy from other enermys when low on enery.. the only way's u can kill it is if there arnt any other enerys around or with a few RPG's or somthing that takes off enery quickly. or she will just keep grabing and sucking energy from the other dudes!!


Submitted by Malus on Sat, 17/07/04 - 9:31 PM Permalink

yikes, freud would have something to say about where that image came from I'm sure. !?

Submitted by Kalescent on Sat, 17/07/04 - 10:51 PM Permalink

Thats a nasty character Adie ! Would fit right in with some sick, twisted horror [:D]

Submitted by MoonUnit on Sun, 18/07/04 - 4:27 AM Permalink

dude its a chick with evil living breasts, thats scary enough for any guy!! :P
seriously though its scary enough for me :)

Submitted by LiveWire on Sun, 18/07/04 - 5:42 AM Permalink

dude that's seriously screwed.

I love it.

Submitted by rezn0r on Sun, 18/07/04 - 6:36 AM Permalink

I think I dated her.

Scott.

Submitted by conundrum on Sun, 18/07/04 - 11:14 AM Permalink

nice concepts so far, i like the kiss of death head, its a really cool idea. keep it up

Submitted by Kalescent on Sun, 18/07/04 - 10:19 PM Permalink

Kiss of death or Ms Dead (Thumbs Up) [:D] looks great I like where this concept is going!

Submitted by adie on Tue, 20/07/04 - 9:04 AM Permalink

ok ill work the kiss of death into it somehow .. think ill make her more rotted and stuff too.. descusting rotted out butt or something

Submitted by MoonUnit on Fri, 23/07/04 - 8:49 AM Permalink

lol nice inclusions to your WIP. I thought she was going to be barefooted though?

Submitted by denz on Fri, 23/07/04 - 9:10 AM Permalink

The character has a lot of potential i think, its reading really well. :) The head piece is my fave part.

haha, thats the coolest block out I've ever seen! good start. my crit would be maybe make the knee area less chunky?

Submitted by adie on Mon, 26/07/04 - 8:20 AM Permalink

ok some quick screen grabs.. only at the halfwaypoint with the polly count so should be able to put some nice clothes here .. not happy with the head going to change. and still need to moddel the brestmouths

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Submitted by MoonUnit on Mon, 26/07/04 - 9:03 AM Permalink

i dont know about the actual face but i like the long neck small head thing, legs could be longer though (looking at your concepts there pretty long there).

Submitted by Jackablade on Mon, 26/07/04 - 10:27 AM Permalink

Hm, her legs look pretty short, though its difficult to see from straight on.

The wings would look much more dynamic (and realistic) if you were to curve the fingers that hold the skin flaps out like on a real bat's wing.

Could we get a closer look at the head, a side view and perhaps an angled one too. The more information you give us, the easier it is to critique. A smooth shaded model with a wireframe on top would be easier to read too.

Submitted by adie on Tue, 27/07/04 - 8:38 AM Permalink

yeah the legs are too short and thick

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heres some more angles and a head close up.. it look s like a man i know!! thats why im going to change it .. the mane problem im having is how u make alpha wings, as I'v never done this befor and I think im going about it the wrong way.. the problem is that the wing membraing is only 1 polly it has no depth.. and so on the front of the wing it looks cool with just 1 smoothing groop

[img]icon_paperclip.gif[/img] Download Attachment: [url="http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/adie/200472683224_frontwing.jpg"]frontwing.jpg[/url]
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.. but on the back it looks crappy because it got sharp lines on the sides of the fingers..

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how can i make it so i dont get this ?? [?]

Submitted by adie on Sat, 31/07/04 - 3:18 AM Permalink

HELP! Please Master

Submitted by Malus on Sat, 31/07/04 - 4:25 AM Permalink

Are you using Max or Maya?

In Max its because you have different smoothing ID's, change them to all be the same ID.
In Maya its because you have sharp edge smoothing along that edge, can't remember where that is off hand.

Submitted by adie on Mon, 02/08/04 - 8:31 AM Permalink

Max and iv alread tryed that and it dosent work :( Thanks anyway Malus.. I think its becaue on the back the normals are facing the other way .. the mesh is not 2 sided(the wing membrain is only one polly thick ..so it has no depth in Y, or if u looked at it from the left u can not see it).. should i be moddeling it 2 sided.. if so how do i do this becaue i want a 2 sided alpha material so i can have hair ..and if u have bothe sides of the wing membarin verts welded to the same spot u get intersecting mesh lines :( .. hmmmm I hope u understand if not ill try and show u in pictures

Submitted by Kalescent on Mon, 02/08/04 - 10:05 AM Permalink

Im not 100% sure of your problem - but if your workin in edit mesh mode - try weld all the verts along the culprit edges together. Often if you extrude edges in Edit mesh mode - and switch to edit poly - it detaches the verts involved and you often end up with 3 or 4 verts over the top of one another that simply cannot be welded.

Just a thought - it may or may not solve the problem ???

Submitted by Kalescent on Wed, 04/08/04 - 9:53 AM Permalink

Awesome i like that addition - very sick indeed. [:D]

Submitted by adie on Fri, 06/08/04 - 7:25 AM Permalink

he he glad u like it Hazard :) its hard trying to compeat with your evil slug

Submitted by adie on Sun, 08/08/04 - 5:59 AM Permalink

quick update with the babys heads still working on there little bodys . been thinking of an idear of what she is .. i think ill make here a Family sect arnti (Ann hamelton berns), this is a Aus comp afert all, so may as well make it Astralian.. for those who dont know about the family sect,they make there kids have sex when there just childrend and when the hit ther teens they lock them in rooms and keep giving them LSD till they screeming and going crazy then they do other bads stuff to them.. they also torture them by dunking there heads in watter till they nealy drown then let them up for air and do it again.. just for doing somthig they think is bad this is just a taste of what they do. oh they also dye all the kids hair blond .. and they have doctor's in the sect who steal the babys from hospitals that are up for adoption.. there evil mother F#%kers

Insert Image: [img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/adie/2004875447_babys.jpg[/img]

Submitted by MoonUnit on Sun, 08/08/04 - 6:03 AM Permalink

dear god man, looking extremely good, but the breast faces had larger jaws and mouths in your concepts which i think i like better then solid faces.

Submitted by Aven on Sun, 08/08/04 - 7:26 AM Permalink

The main character's face is nice and freaky. The eyes just set it all off nicely :)

Agree with Moony. The breasts looked better when they were a head as opposed to a neck.