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Storm Mage
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Now your Talking. Alot better composition and some detail!!
Ok critiques, be careful with the right side of his body, its perspective is already slipping especially in the face and the bottom of the corset.
Also, a small thing and its really pedantic but you have alot of space above his head, unless you have a focal point up there, it may detract from the overall flow of the piece.
Really love the loose feel of your work but I must say seeing something more detailed like this is a good change. Keep up the good work. [:)]
Now your Talking. Alot better composition and some detail!!
Ok critiques, be careful with the right side of his body, its perspective is already slipping especially in the face and the bottom of the corset.
Also, a small thing and its really pedantic but you have alot of space above his head, unless you have a focal point up there, it may detract from the overall flow of the piece.
Really love the loose feel of your work but I must say seeing something more detailed like this is a good change. Keep up the good work. [:)]