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Been working on this for the last few days.
c&c welcome.
Pantmonger
Looks great Pants.
I would agree on the head thang also and the background is a little to bland for the characters, especially since they are night elves, I think a dark background like your first fan art would be much better.
Everytime you post one of these I get really motivated to do one myself, never do though lol.
The leather and creases are looking great man, especially the male elves left glove.
I'd like to see it a little less desaturated too but thats a personal choice not really valid.
Nice work, Pantmonger. I was gonna mention the face thing, but got beaten to it. I think as well as the width reduction, perhaps you can increase the length of the male elf's face a little. His chin leaves a lot to be desired if compared to Blizzard CG. Then again, perhaps that's ur unique style. Once again, kewl stuff. :)
Great work.
The first thing that came into my head when I saw this was "this looks like Warcraft 3 concept art" Nice job on cpaturing that style.
As for crits well the male elves face looks a little too wide, you could probably fix this by extending the hair over the face more.
The fur and cloth are done very well.
The rock and grass are a littl dull though, but no biggie
Nice work :)