Character: Black Lord Updated

whoa.. Kicks ass..

Bet those tubes were fun.
No crits.. Looking good so far though.

Hey, are you in russia?

PHWOAR!!

This is why I want to do some high poly stuff. Very cool.

Totally awesome.

Maybe you should enter the high poly comp if it ever happens, looking at your model you'd probably blow me away. Keep updating, i'd like to see it finished.

I second Malus.. PHWOARRRRR!!!

Excellent pipeworks there.

looks good so far metro-
just a couple things

- the corners of your lips are too sharp. and pull them in some.
- top lip needs a litte more definition and changed a little so its not like the bottom lip
- that crease under the mouth is a bit strong.
- the ear is a little flat and sharp. just needs more roundness overall..if that makes sense.. :)
- his upper cheekbone line is following the wrong line. its cutting over the cheek.

my only suggestions on the general shape of his head are
- maybe pull in the sides of his mouth (under his cheekbones). give him that guy pierce look lol....just give him a little more shape.
- define the temple a little.

- only problem i see with your "suit" mesh is the inner lining behind his head. its not meeting flush with that suit. it looks like you have cloned it off the suit mesh then built off it. but then added more detail into the suit so when they are smoothed they dont meet up.

just an idea...where the pipes go into his head. maybe you could detail that a little more. make them "plug" in. just a thought.

keep it up :)

Beside the changes that inglis pointed out, I think that the brow cerses the skin a little to much, which makes to eye socket over all look a little funny.

Very nice work on the tubes.

very nice work [:)] some very high iterations there...... well done

Hi, guys!

Thanks for comments I appreciate them very high.

Sorceror Bob - Yes, I am from Russia.
inglis - You have a great eye for details! Thanks, all Your comments are very usefull.

Best regards.
Metro 3D

no problems. keep us updated with your progress.

very nice, i'ld say it's perfect if not for the minor lip flaw already pointed out.

Very nice work. I like the stylised way of modelling you have acheived. It reminds me of the chiselled features on the characters in the movie Ice Age.

My only suggestion is with the mufflers on his back, maybe the could look a bit more 'worn', and thicker metal overall. More bulky.

But All in all i really like the design, and cant wait to see it finished.

Hi guys,

I am still working on this character and it still far from completion.
Anyway here is small update. Check it please and give me Your comments. The link is old:
http://metro3d.narod.ru/tempics.html

Thanks,
Metro3D.
http://metro3d.narod.ru