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Some Models

Submitted by codyalday on

Some models that I have done lately, what do you guys and gals think, crits and comments please?

[IMG]http://www.sumea.com.au/simages2/429_CCL.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://www.sumea.com.au/simages2/429_AnatWIPL.jpg[/IMG]

Submitted by conundrum on Thu, 30/12/04 - 9:53 AMPermalink

the second is very nice but unfortunately the first has quite a few problems. in general, all you need to do is keep tweaking it, particulaly the size of the head and neck, they are far too small for the body. you should also try to look ata some anatomy references to see the way muscles flow, the shoulder is too boxy in the first image. The second pic has much better proportions (though the hands are very small and stumpy). you have also made better use of the polys when defining the shape of the body. keep it up

Submitted by codyalday on Thu, 30/12/04 - 10:30 AMPermalink

I take it that the comment was for picture two, not picture one?

Submitted by conundrum on Thu, 30/12/04 - 2:14 PMPermalink

sorry, i wasnt very clear

this was pic 1:
in general, all you need to do is keep tweaking it, particulaly the size of the head and neck, they are far too small for the body. you should also try to look ata some anatomy references to see the way muscles flow, the shoulder is too boxy

this was pic 2:
The second pic has much better proportions (though the hands are very small and stumpy). you have also made better use of the polys when defining the shape of the body. keep it up

Submitted by codyalday on Fri, 31/12/04 - 12:25 AMPermalink

Oh, I get it now. The first picture, the character is wearing body protection armour, so it looks like he is really big, but yes, I think the head and neck needs scaling up.

The hands I just started, only done the palm, no fingers, so thats why it looks very stumpy. Anyways, thankaz for the commments.

Posted by codyalday on

Some models that I have done lately, what do you guys and gals think, crits and comments please?

[IMG]http://www.sumea.com.au/simages2/429_CCL.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://www.sumea.com.au/simages2/429_AnatWIPL.jpg[/IMG]


Submitted by conundrum on Thu, 30/12/04 - 9:53 AMPermalink

the second is very nice but unfortunately the first has quite a few problems. in general, all you need to do is keep tweaking it, particulaly the size of the head and neck, they are far too small for the body. you should also try to look ata some anatomy references to see the way muscles flow, the shoulder is too boxy in the first image. The second pic has much better proportions (though the hands are very small and stumpy). you have also made better use of the polys when defining the shape of the body. keep it up

Submitted by codyalday on Thu, 30/12/04 - 10:30 AMPermalink

I take it that the comment was for picture two, not picture one?

Submitted by conundrum on Thu, 30/12/04 - 2:14 PMPermalink

sorry, i wasnt very clear

this was pic 1:
in general, all you need to do is keep tweaking it, particulaly the size of the head and neck, they are far too small for the body. you should also try to look ata some anatomy references to see the way muscles flow, the shoulder is too boxy

this was pic 2:
The second pic has much better proportions (though the hands are very small and stumpy). you have also made better use of the polys when defining the shape of the body. keep it up

Submitted by codyalday on Fri, 31/12/04 - 12:25 AMPermalink

Oh, I get it now. The first picture, the character is wearing body protection armour, so it looks like he is really big, but yes, I think the head and neck needs scaling up.

The hands I just started, only done the palm, no fingers, so thats why it looks very stumpy. Anyways, thankaz for the commments.