Activity #2 2d - Pantmonger

Looking good pants :)
Your line work is really good.
The jaw line on the left looks too straight (thus slightly masculine), curve it up towards the ear might help abit.

Your definately improving good stuff;)

The shadow on the chest looks a bit off and around the right eye, but maybe I am getting the tattoo's and the shadows confused. And the breast could be a little softer where the strap is crossing it.
Overall I like it.
cool banana's :P

Thats awesome Pants, I was waiting for your entry to show up, fashionably late [;)]

Cool work Pants. Can't wait to see her with you usual coloured flair :) She doesn't have your usual anime stle, and she looks quite cool.

Nice un Pants, I think this one most fits in with the NWN/BG style, great stuff!

Thanks for the positive comments and crits guys, I will attempt (have attempted) to curve the jaw a little more and to soften the breast.

Funny thing about the anime thing Aven is that its not my usual stuff, just something I have been trying to learn, hence the majority of posts in that style.

[img]http://www.pantmonger.com/random/nw_wip02.jpg[/img]

Well I?m about two thirds though the basic value work, hope to finish the values tomorrow and start on the colour.

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Looking cool :) Well that explains why this style is better :) Sorry, I have only ever seen your anime styled work.

this is way cool...what's the inspiration your working from, your muse so to say?

Looking good Pants, something is wrong with her eye placement though.

Nice- i really like that B+W pic... funky stuff.

Yeah this one rules.

Possibly with the eyes comment, it seems that her eye line is slightly more to the horizontal than the rest of her face?

I know you still have to colour it, but leaving it black and white and pink does give it that romantic look.[:p]

Great work !

Aven: Thanks, as for my previous comment, no need to be sorry, I wasn??t angry or anything, it was jest an observance ??

Rosco: Thanks, Um my inspiration?K well I like to draw, im a bit of a fan boy so drawing fantasy and the like attracts me, other then that I just flicked through a magazine till I found a head I though would work well and then used it as reference.

Smeg: Thanks

Malus and IronhideNT: Thanks for the crit, I drifted the semi obscured eye down a bit to address the overly horizontal placement, it may need a bit more, Ill see what I can do.

[img]http://www.pantmonger.com/random/nw_wip03.jpg[/img]

Uptate, finished basic tones.

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Looks really sweet. The only thing I notice is that the hemisphere on her left shoulder looks a little funky. As if it has rolled to an odd position.

Looking good. How are you going to colour it?

Aven: Thanks, Ill try and fix that hemisphere so that it does not look so wrong.
Makk: Thanks, I?ll be adding the colour using photoshop (its the only digital art program I own).

Update: About 50% of the base colour done.

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[img]http://www.pantmonger.com/random/nw_wip04.jpg[/img]

[img]http://www.pantmonger.com/random/nw_done.jpg[/img]

And I think I'm pretty much done.
Thanks to those who helped with this pic, it is appreciated.

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very very cool, no crits from me :D
reminds me of blizards warcraft 3 night-elves

Ended up really nice, well done pants. As for the colouring, to me she didnt have the night-elf feel, I really expected to see warm pinkish skin and a brunette lot of hair LOL!

Anyhoo it looks great!

She ended up really well done :) My eye is constantly drawn to that bright green light in the bg though.

Thanks for the compliments guys, Aven you are right about the green light (The glowing bow string) I did not think it would draw the eye so much, whoops.

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Hey, that looks like Jana Wendt! [:)]

Thats kinda freaky...... [:0]

Hey yeah it does look like her! Haha.. Wow that is freaky indeed!