Please Crit - She, Just Landed

Submitted by justgord on
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Hi guys from nu member, ex melbournian kiwi
programmer-artist currently in Bangkok :)

Id like your critiques on this piece that
Ive just put up on cgtalk here -
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=251144

Cheers, cool site!

Submitted by Lechy on Sat, 25/06/05 - 9:32 AMPermalink

I agree with all that was said on cgtalk, plus you need to sort out your light sources. There seem to be a lot of contradicting shadow areas. The pillars in the background suggest that the main light source is coming from the far top left, the foreground suggests that it is coming from the top.

cheers.

Posted by justgord on
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Work in progress

Hi guys from nu member, ex melbournian kiwi
programmer-artist currently in Bangkok :)

Id like your critiques on this piece that
Ive just put up on cgtalk here -
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=251144

Cheers, cool site!

Submitted by Lechy on Sat, 25/06/05 - 9:32 AMPermalink

I agree with all that was said on cgtalk, plus you need to sort out your light sources. There seem to be a lot of contradicting shadow areas. The pillars in the background suggest that the main light source is coming from the far top left, the foreground suggests that it is coming from the top.

cheers.