Some Lineart

I'm finding it quite difficult to read -- I'd say study up on the subject matter you're going for and try and better define the elements you're putting down; I don't want to come off sounding harsh, but the only clear things I'm getting from it is it's a bipedal humanoid type of thing, with some form of interlocked plating, a hand, and a staff. The rest confuses me.

thanks for the reply, no problem with the crit, i have a habit of drawing stuff that makes perfect sense to me but completely starange to other people. the reason i put it up is so id get some idea of what im doing wrong as i find it sort of hard to tell
heres the original sketch
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