Heres my first blast, kind of a speed blot. I posted the same pic in the other thread! [:I]
Eyes are a bit high on the head, need to come down a tad. Im going to add a bit more personality into his face, give him some life in the next revision.
Heres my first quick colour / lights / darks, done for tonight.
Will smooth up tomorrow. [:)]
[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/simages2/219_qtarncolor.jpg[/img]
Some good colour work in there, are you going to leave some linework there or paint over the top of it?
I would probably elimanite the wrinkle lines at the sides of his mouth area and lift the edges of his lips so he isnt got that frowning look on him. Also, maybe adjust his eyes so he is looking at the viewer, at the moment he looks like he is looking at my chest not my eyes.
looking good cept for the previously mentioned eye thing and personally i think his nose is maybe a tad too long (vertically). maybe bring the eye line (along with the top of the nose) down a tad... well thats just a thought, i could be entirely wrong but its something my subconcious picked up.
oh and nice colours :D
Good start. Not much to crit apart from what has been said.
Will you be doing the final version traditional or digital?