While working for the game project Legands of Apaila i terned both this project and my vcd foilo into the same thing to give me more time and efficansy to work on it.
these 5 pages are the pre developmental work for the ice human race.. the Humane. each page took around 1-2 hours at most and are very skeatchy at best.. but this is becouse its mostly brainstroming..
im going to use this foilo to get into the AIE in melbourne.. im currently studying in year 12.
enjoy
next: part 2.. refined weapons...
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^^all good points.. and there points i know of..
the main reason why the pics above are so messy is becouse there brainstroming thumbs... i mean when i get to the developmental drawing.. yes of corse their going to be clean and ruled and using perspective and grathic convensions... these thumbs needed to be done as quick as possable.. thus why they look like they where drawn on bark. :)
not too bad, theres a lot of work here so that certainly shows a decent level of application which is good. i have to back up Anuxinamoon's point about anatomy, improving it will really help a lot. books are great and certainly worth getting but if for some reason that isn't possible id suggest browsing through a few of these sites.
have a look through all of this section (and tutuorial sub section) of conceptart
[url]http://www.conceptart.org/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=7[/url] especially the tutorials by fredflickstone and kchen ( both pros with a massive understanding of anatomy and drawing skills in general.
also its worth looking through this site, [url]http://www.tsofa.com/forum/index.php?sid=9923c06ab0b2eea509317900866356…], particularly anything by mentler
hopefully that helps because its certainly worth continuing your concept work
When drawing any sort of non organic image (symbols, weapons, machinery and buildings) It would be best to use some rulers and other mathematical instuments to so the work with. Cleanliness is next to godliness and it will make your work look 120% more professional. If you can get your hands on a mathomat or even some french curves, they help alot with the curved lines found on some axes and other weapons. :)
Clean up your art, present it neater and your work will shine.
With your faces, I suggest looking into a few anatomy books for proportions and such. I recently bought one called "Dynamic Figure Drawing" It's a really helpful book and could prove some use to you ;)
Anyway good luck with it all :)