Hi all,
Thanks Souri for such a great challenge. I'm really enjoying seeing everyone's work, so here is mine..
Sorry for the long back story but I was really getting in to it.
Cheers
Lucas
GM food boss
Set in the present day, our story begins with the exploration of Mars. The Mars rover comes across the sign of intelligent life, and the obscure remnants of a large civilization. The information That they find is mostly obscure, except for this one document that shows how to genetically modify a crop. The government tries to keep the document classified but some how it is leaked through the internet. A GM food corporation gets the information and uses the plans to create the GM crop. They find that the crop yields a huge percentage more product then previous crops. It also is non-self-seeding and releases a biological attack on near by crops. What the corporation doesn't realise is that it also releases a chemical to humans and animals near by. The Chemical amplifies emotions and deforms there physique. This has a detrimental effect on GM Corporations Management team, it turns the CEO into a greedy obsessed monster and the racist violent rednecks who the GM Corp get to grow the crop into well... cannon fodder. But eating the crop has a subduing efect and after a long period of time, changes consumers metabolism, makeing them obese.
The player is a university scientist who gets the Mars GM plans when they hear from a whistle blower that the notoriously negligent corporation has them. But instead of placing the crops strait into the environment, they do extremely controlled tests. After quite awhile of testing they see that the crops have the ability to attack other crops. So they set out to the farms to investigate, it's here where the fun begins.
On there journey they learn more about the crop and discover that the GM plans are the first stage of a alien's invasion plan. The crops are designed to destabilize the planet by making GM Management so immoral and greedy that they will be easily manipulated to do the dirty work and the masses plumped and subordinate ready for the hungry invaders.
The Character that I will be making is a "Boss Character", he is the boss of the bosses, the Mr big the big Kahuna, the CEO of the GM corporation. The man who comes from old money that was created through generations of exploiting people. The man who's moral fiber was last seen and then completely disappeared from his D.N.A centuries ago when his ancestors where in the slave trade.
The Boss appears several times before in the game but he escapes scarred and returns bigger and more horrific the following time. This is him at his final metamorphoses. His face is burnt, he is naked and his genitals have gone the same way as the crop, unable to reproduce. His chemical make up has changed so that he is now producing a drug similar to PCP (angel dust) in his vanes, and he will stop at nothing to feed his greed.
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looking very nice, i was originally thinking of doing a fat/obese character myself, as it would probably be the best way to make use of the polies.as i said its looking great so far, although i think you might need to spread his legs a bit because of something about the way they are righ now looks a little off. other than that its superb
Another fat guy eh. Well as long as you don't sit him on a skinny horse he'll be different enough to mine I suppose.
Your story is really good. Kind of a modern day take on Day of the Triffids. Real potential for a game or movie there. I'm not really sure about the concept, but it could work ok with a bit more concepting I think.
Thanks guys for your feed back.
I feel the boss needs to be strong rather then flabby. My main concern at the moment is makeing him more scary. So I have added the wounds of previous battles, to try and reduce the marshmallow man factor...
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PUFFIN FRESH! :D
I love the story. If you are aiming to make a really obese guy, then you may want to make him flabbier. Just depends what you are after.